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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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one  time  I  looked  and I saw
 
some people  spreading  their
 
wings kicking and splashing
 
in the deep it looked like fun
 
so  welcoming and easy to me
 
but when I jumped in  water
 
touched my feet I started to
 
drown immediately suddenly it
 
came to me I could not swim
 
thinking to myself upon rescue
 
what was I  thinking it  was not
 
easy to do could  have  been
 
the last  of  you  drowning
 
in that  pool  but I  thought I
 
could do what I saw others 

do without first learning how

to struggle before I could fly

 

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2b2b2 says:

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LP45 says:

Great write Wize! Powerful and thought provoking. Life lessons. Thank you for sharing this.

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mlowe5 says:

A great allegorical lesson indeed! We with more have yet to learn the lessons of achievement of our ancestors who had less to begin with. We're still leaping before looking. Peace and Love my Wize Brother, mlowe5

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