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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I hate the fact that
I didn't marry you
I hate the fact that
you're married now
I hate the fact that
I'm feeling down
I hate the fact that
you're not around
I hate the fact that
I missed the sign
I hate the fact that
I been so blind
I hate the fact that
I'm spending time
I hate the fact that
you're on my mind
I hate the fact that
I can't turn back time
I hate the fact that
I wrote these lines
I hate the fact that
we're in these times
I hate the fact that
it's almost valentine
I hate the fact that
your voice is no more
I hate the fact that
we're almost at war
I hate the fact that
life is not fair
I hate the fact that
I'm here  you're there

 

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mlowe5 says:

A powerful pen of the truth of love. When love is penned it overpowers all hate. "Being in love" has its moments; but "to love" is everlasting. 16 "hates" are overpowered by the 1 "love" that gave birth to this confessing pen! Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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2b2b2 says:

Dang Wise....mlowe5 summed it best....well played....ONE
 

Brownchildt says:

Hindsight is 2020 that’s what makes your poem feel so real it reminds the reader of that.. Great piece

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