to those who say I stopped caring
I did not stop caring, I stopped to
care for myself bandaging my own
wounds couldn't depend on no one else
thought I could but found out
you have to do something
not wait for something to happen
if life's a ship it's better to be the captain
than to be the captive below deck
some time you don't have to
do a curtain thing to change
all it takes is stop doing the same
things become unpredictable
change fragrance throw 'em off scent
throw 'em off course and they
will no longer want to follow
you where ever you go because
they know they can't go
so they say in a sarcastic way
"YOU CHANGED" translation
I can't get over on you no more
I can't say things to trigger you to
do more I feel like I don't know
you anymore I can't control your
feelings anymore I can't come to you
with mines anymore what happen to
you "FOOL" you used to be cool
can't you see I have a need for you
to fill why don't you care why don't
you feel for me do the thing you
always did for me answer me why
all my calls go straight to voicemail
did you get my massage I need help
"WHY DON'T YOU CARE"? I did not stop
caring, I stopped to care for myself
The Immortal Wize
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mlowe5 says: Deep reflective pen. When others remain dormant, it becomes difficult for them to relate to another's growth. We can only help them to grow by ensuring that our growth is continuous. More Light to you, Brother. Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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