She came and she went
Moving with no direction
In search of purpose
gmcgee325
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RonnieL says: Nice Haiku by you😉 |
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gmcgee325 says: Thank you Ronnie L â¤ï¸ |
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mrmelody7 says: When it comes to Haiku I am lost so tip of the hat to those that do un I would rather count how much change I got laying around then count vowels or whatever |
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gmcgee325 says: It's a very easy form to get mrmelody7 and based off of your talents I have concluded you've never tried... I know it'll be a piece of cake for you if you tried â¤ï¸ |
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mrmelody7 says: Lazy writer though I always did good in English I never like english class but my themes were always read in class literature was 50% part of our final exam always liked literature but the verbs pre predicate modifyers had to really put the thinking hat on |
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Coalhouse says: Dope |
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LP45 says: Very nice gmcgee. I've always liked haikus. So much is said with so few words. Thanks for sharing. |
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gmcgee325 says: Thanks Ladypoet45 I appreciate it â¤ï¸ |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Dope flow! |
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