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I tried

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I tried it my way

Everytime I run into dismay

What can I do to make you stay

When you're absolutely against everything I say

Telling you I love you has done no good

Supporting your dreams is wrong as well 

Or maybe I've misunderstood

Talk to me and tell me the issue

Why do you feel like you need to be rescued

From the one person who had never abandoned you

Make me understand this hate

What have I done to make this our fate

Do you hurt me because you know behind God

I'm the only one that loves you unconditional

Does that automatically make me the bad guy

No matter what I do I'm always the one to blame

I'm always the one that should be ashamed

Because I have loved you and cared for you so much

Because I was always a sucker for my baby's touch

Because your smile had always been what I desired to see

And trying to make you into the best person you could possibly be

Somehow this makes me your number one enemy

I'm just plain confused

And I don't understand

How am I so wrong for being your number one fan

I've tried it my way

I hope yours don't bring along the end

I'm handing it to God and pray that he will mend

Whatever it is that's broken in your heart

All I know is

I'll love you forever

And you'll always be my baby girl 

I've tried it my way

The only thing that's left for me to say is....

I LOVE YOU! 

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2b2b2 says:

WOW...Heartfelt Write...Love lasts is all that counts and that is what breaks all barriers...thanks for sharing...ONE
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gmcgee325 says:

Thanks 2b2b2❤️

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mrmelody7 says:

There is nothing more then the sincere effort nothing more valiant then a sincere I tried
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gmcgee325 says:

Thanks mrmelody7 ❤️

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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