I thought the way of it all was to build walls. A wall around my Heart to keep out hurt. A wall around my Mind to not be taken advantage of. A wall around my body to keep in angst. But with one look you disarmed my physical shield. The intensity of your gaze pierces right thru to the center of me...Shuddering now...With your tongue you spit droplets of knowledge,sarcasm, and truth filled lies. My mind was introduced to seduction...In sets Destruction...Body aching for a touch, mind preoccupied with thoughts of you. The walls now doors that you easily pass thru. afraid yet willing to give you my Heart. Fire that burns...The ice melting starts and the flood begins! Emotional tides rising never falling. Me without a life raft, getting pounded by the surf of want, dragged under by the riptide of deceit, and finally carried away by a current of wishfulness...The waters still for a moment, time to gasp for air, grasp for clearity. Head above water now and easily treading only to get sucked into the whirlpool of rejection!....sinking,sinking,sinking.
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jojo says: what you need to do is Let Go and Let God. You're too cute to be holding in all that anger and frustration. all it will do is scare people away and you'll always be alone. i'm sure you don't want that. remember, God loves you and so do ipoems by this commentor
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takiyahalee says: you have no filter! I like constructive criticism but you are doing the most! It is not what you say it is how you say it! being that these poems are not dated and you do not know me I will forgive your insults but you need to tell me what you want. Telling me i am cute does not negate the fact that you offended me. |
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jojo says: know what. i realize that no matter what i say, you ain't trying to hear it; and it doesn'tmatter how it's conveyed. i'm truly sorry for even saying anything to you. but keep one thing in mind, you started the whole thing. if you want to stay mad at the world, keep me out of it. and one more thing, if you ever say another negative, ***ed up comment ablout my poems, i gurantee you this, i'll give you a reason to be mad and sad at the same time. think i'm playing, try me ! happy now? |
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takiyahalee says: I have never commented negatively to any of your poems. Nor have i cursed at you so thank you for your thoughts and Have a good night sir |
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