at first I thought I was in love
then something happened
it changed my mind
suddenly I could see
as tho I had been blind
thoughts changed
you were no longer
on my mind then
the thought occurred
to me you were a star
I was only watching TV
you were out for blood
looking for a come up
I had to put the gun up with
no intentions of putting it down
this is insane as crazy as it sounds
tried to turn the page but
had to write it down
The Immortal Wize
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LP45 says: Wow. Crazy wordplay excellently penned. Thanks for sharing. |
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mlowe5 says: Got it! Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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