I have been thinking about the life I had lived; the steps I took to get to thee;
The things I did to survive till date,
this are things I could never say out loud for shame burdens me for you to know.
I was never perfect, I have demons inside laying in silence just waiting to strike, but Staying close to you sets me free for a moment, if only you knew what hides behind my smiles, oh if only you knew the burden I had carried all this while.
How perfect your life seems or is it?
What if we are both thesame,
What if you have secrets to,
What if I cured your pain for a moment just as you did to mine,
This are thoughts I ponder on,
We are not just loving, but we are surviving together,
We are not perfect, but together we are almost, for Our bond keeps the demons out.
We have been thinking about the life we had lived, but when we are together the past keeps to its name.
By iscomart
Iscomart
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mlowe5 says: Keep writing Iscomart. As your feedback tutor, keep a dictionary at hand and check usage. To me, I automati, cly read "these" when it was written, "this". Yet your message was clear. There is no shame in checking/editing a poem. Hey, I had to retype some of the words in this feedback. Indeed, as you have said, "...we are not perfect..." and I know this is not tru of me. You have a beautiful poetic mind. May I be your guiding tutor? Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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Iscomart says: Mlowe5 I would be very glad if you tutor me. Thank you very much for the corrections. With the help of a professional like you, I would be able to learn faster. |
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Charles2 says: Pretty good ...secrets, leave out the details ...perfect. can sense the deep, intense thought behind this working... there are 360 degrees of looking at and presenting it, just as many different dimensions. once again... experiment... work hard at it... most of all... have fun |
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