walked through the door looked around suddenly I heard a sound something telling me to look down stepped in something on the ground foot was stuck to the pavement "your new shoes" shouted the one I came with the place was crowded no one heard my fussing cussing yelling and complaining so I stepped outside suddenly it started raining "you're all wet" laughed the one I came with I went back inside shivering cold every one was having a good time I'm the only one who felt like crying
so I decided to go leaving behind the one I came with I mean who needs a tagalong pointing out the obvious
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Pointless Points
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