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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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He Comes She Goes

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she goes in with the sun
he comes out with the moon

 in her hand she hold stars
on his feet are his wings

 she declares her love to him
he swears he loves her true
 
 there's somthing missing
between the two she

 take a star and turns it into
a son he took his son to the sky

 he got too close to the sun
she screams what have you done

 all he can do is fly and cry
while she mourns inside

she no longer sees stars in his eyes
every time he sees her she cries

" raised him up too high"

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mlowe5 says:

A beautiful intriguing allegorical write. Thanks for sharing this deep pen. Peace and Love, mlowe.

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