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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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the thing you're holding on to is draining the life out of you to live a life of its own holding on is not making you stronger actually it's cleaning your bones stop feeding it fuel it makes it strong it gains weight from the weight you lose let go of it turn it loose stop being caretaker to what is not being a caregiver to you its not loyal it's not tried and true it's just trying to live by latching onto what's holding on to it again turn it loose it has lost its appreciation it cannot be appraised appeased or pleased it's a disease it has no worth it has no value it's the thing that's going to be the death of you people will mourn and cry over the death of you not even once asking "how come you took your life"

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Bragee says:

NObody ever cares until its too late
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks. I am pleased to be in the presence of such a Wize Poet. This is a powerful wording of the growth and development of a pregnant poetic mind of a Laureat Mayor! Peace and Love, M'Lowe

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