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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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open the sky I need to see stars tonight

  tired of dark clouds in my light actually

haven't seen hide nor hair of the moon

 since last week sometime I see clearly

the signs of time every time my clock

 ticks 1111, 222, 333, 444, 555 winding

down and winding up falling back and

speeding up too old to believe in good

 luck matters how many times it struck

deep in the middle of hums ready for

 what comes inside the trenches like

a foxhole dressed like a ninja turtle

 back to the clock eyes on the block

no need  for it got a watch on spare

 

 

 

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Nice. No matter which zone we're in, time remains itself. While it may allow us to "zone" forward, it never falls back "tock-ticking". Thanks. Enjoying you prolific zoning shares. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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