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Garden Kisses

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"Garden Kisses" Here we lay naked I open my heart and mind to you I shed my tears Confessed my fears Gave you apart of me And you switched gears You accelerated quickly Didn't allow me to finish My dream that i thought would come true With you You left me wide open With no intent to find closure The exposure It left me vulnerable That'll be intolerable Had the shoe been on the other foot But you serenade me with your garden kisses Slipped venom in my veins From the serpent that offered me fruit That i thought was passion So I called it passionfruit It was tempting Sex was juicy The passion was fruitful Tho it was just an illusion Garden Kisses Straight from Adam himself Did Eve really *** over Adam in the garden if he knew of the fruit? Had she been manipulated by his sweet serenade deciet? He planted the seeds in her garden knowing how she nourishes his roots. She speaks life into his spirit and offers her will to him Only for him to accept her offerings with not real intent on loving her She progress He doesn't digress He says, he loves her She's blinded by his sweet caress Gaze into his eyes She sees where no love lies Empty spaces Smiling faces Clown like faces She's constipated Anticipating on love to reciprocate Not realizing his love is dissipating The garden falls short But his kisses are long She doesn't see it now But in the end he'll be long gone He'll turn his back on her She'll blame herself for being so stupid Not realizing it was all just a masquerade game He sold her a dream Made her believe he was magic Told her all of his was hers Til she woke up from his garden And reverse the script She gave him a taste of his own medicine And that's when Adam bit the fruit. When a man findeth a good thing he best not *** it up. -lations 1:1 -"Garden Kisses" Peace, Love, Light and Poetry Thank you for your support @nicole_thepoet @PeaceLoveLightandPoetry

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Karma says:

"...Slipped venom in my veins From the serpent that offered me fruit"-- This is What Poetry is All About! Great Write. I Loved the Movement and Rhythm of this Poem.
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Kingqadardwon' says:

Outstanding write! Great job poet.. This was Dope! I'm on IG you can also find me there. .. @Oneintelligentbrother
 

Wise_Notion says:

Heavy..really enjoyed reading...thanks for sharing
 

Chasingmysoul says:

I absolutely love! Well written

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