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Chasingmysoul
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Fire and Ice

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first love

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Hot Slow burn

Even hell despise this flame

Aint sweet all though

Suga  my given name

Filled with tainted

And I spit the remains

Need to repent

But thats where my demons comes to play

Hell raiser

Although it wasn't what I originally seeked

Welcomed it because the life I lived made me weak

Thought it could uplift me

And give me

power

In truths it did

But made me sour

Made me a downer

With days that'll make Hercules cower

Tried to contain it

But getting hotter by the hour

Temper rocketin'

Soon to be, off the charts

Aimed to kill like poisonous darts

Went for the heart

But that’s when I got mine

Feeling in my chest

And then back down my spine

Never expected to get got

Hell never tried to protect my spot

Throat in knot's

Who'd want me?

Settled down feeling icy

Took over me

And just when

I felt..

I could love ....

Sh*t shattered my head like I wasn’t good enough

Mentally killed me peacefully

Cold took over easily

So iced down

I'd make the North Pole jealous

Hell; couldnt fight

I was just that helpless

Breathless, as it calmly attacked

Made my heart compact

And didnt really beg

For it too come back

It was cool'

And I was cracked

Maybe it didn't work

From something I lacked

But still it held the greatest impact

Ive felt the burns of the flames to my soul

But in the end

I was left straight cold;

Let all the sh*t unfold

--Point Blank--

Love can't be controlled. 

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COMMENTS

 

Karma says:

I Loved the Edginess of this Write. The In-Depth Look into Yourself and the Ability to Communicate it on a Level of the Gods. God Poem!
 

love_supreme says:

This poem was insane goodness. Loved it.

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mrmelody7 says:

I call this a throw down write the love of writing to actually see your thoughts come alive step back say yeah thats me you craft very well
 

LP45 says:

Awesome write Chasingmysoul, Great flow, imagery and all around I felt every line. Very well done!

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