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When existence flipped

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Somewhere, when it all began From our distorted point of view

(knee to the neck ...vision)Prisoners of a life sentence 

  

Crimes against us. Justice without truth 

Is this of the god (to whom you offer us in sacrifice) 

 

Jesus hair like wool/skin of bronze

Hues not to be confused Message of love abused 

 

Know how it feels to suffer 

Continuously feeding ungrateful hearts

 

Giving love praying for peace 

To ease the heartache of so many broken vows  

 

We must now shatter the illusions we hold dear

To realize our truth in this matter we, who 

 

Serve on the flagship of oppulent misery... 

By those who choose greed, above their need... 

 

We must conclude with heavy heart... 

We... Are... Still, prisoners... 

 

Underserved, receiving undeserved punishment... 

For crime committed  Against us 

 

Under God Under the gun, under the knee on our neck... 

being used

 

Looking inside out for all we know

Your version of anything goes

 

The universe spiraled, its infinitive galaxies

Particles crossed dimensions

 

In and out of existence, living as pure energy

Divine winds became temporal

 

Galactic equilibrium, began to shift

Coded particles, coalesced

 

In orchestral melodies Creating movements

on their own free will

 

and spun within their axis Just for the thrill

On a spiritual plane Big enough for all of us

 

To live Before God

Made diverse social structures

 

That we might find the right system

To further our collective development

 

And freely choose our angle of trajectory

To advance and consolidate our gains

 

In accordance with a design Worthy and true

With humility in the will For all mankind

 

The chosen are sent to enhance and pursue

The cohesion, with justice and stability for all

 

Rather, than the wretched few

To live or die, for stolen wealth

 

No longer in our purview

 

 

C2  

 

 

Not sure How this whole thing

Went from blessed life, in the garden

 

To sup and dine with the divine

To the fountain of youth went dry

 

And the blessed state of being

Which had existed

 

Between our spheres of influence

Left us as adversaries

 

All civility became lost in our missteps

As our willingness to understand slipped

 

Mistakes, became our new routine   

Lost confidence in our ability to learn

 

Lost sight of our dream

Began to continuously get burned

 

Lost our grip as We lost hope

Went awry

 

Continued, endlessly to fall

Damn, near Lost it, all

 

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mlowe5 says:

Powerful cosmic truths with methphoric blinking and shooting stars of enlightenment. Yes, we "...damn near lost it all.." Pray...we take what's left and create a new liberated world for "mattering" life! Thanks for the share, C2. Peace and Love, M. Lowe.
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Charles2 says:

Powerful returns from your reading of view.. from the echoes of my mind songs... thank you...

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