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LP45 says: Absolutely nothing wrong with it. A mere imposition of views. Thanks for the share. |
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mlowe5 says: Indeed, we must not let other people's conception of who we are/what we are doing be our own conception of who we are or what we are doing. Was not the first Black USA President, left handed?????? Peace and Love, mlowe5. |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize
Level Of Intensity (07232025)finger popping audible rhythmic component humanizing elemental sound of action snapping fingers to the rhythm fostering physical sensation vibrating to the rhythm of the beat percussions of the body maintaining tempo transducing cosmic energy flowing frequency tune referring to the pitch of sound fast slow high or low tone the quality of sound fluent instrumental voices measuring clicks and clacks per minute expression of energetic connection |
On High (07232025)why can't we live in the sky what's holding us down is it gravity or is it poverty a little bit of both probably gravity can't hold down the elevated please hold the elevator I'm about to go up |
Go Now (07232025)if I told you how to get there would you go would you not rush take it slow if I told you how to get there would you leave right now wait awhile if I told you how to get there would you say ok I'll try to get there someday maybe tomorrow not today if I told you how to get there would take the directions like advice think about it twice if I told you how to get there would you go so I can look up one day and see you got there |
All That Remains (07232025)take the gun out your mouth you the problem you complain about you can do it now nobody gone give a damn about you later no problem is unsolvable anything is possible it takes a brave heart to face the world everyday don't nobody want to pick up your scattered brains |
The Matter (07232025)time fly like jet planes into tall things we go to war over small things ready to kill for nothing food on the table still complain when hunger is real pain don't like where we are but refuse to change |
Wide (07232025)there's a ocean of tears between us too much to swallow too much too dry a ocean of tears between you and I a division I cried |
Crystal Clear (07232025)salt in the pores salt in the urine salt in the ducts salt in the water a sprinkle in a cup salt in the bath salt in the beads salt in my DNA salt is is my need pillar of salt pillar of stone pillar of life wisdom built homes salt on the table salt on food salt in my eye salt on the floor salt in every corner of the room salt is salty salt is good salt is clearly misunderstood |
Wreathed In Whisper's (07212025)when dear ones leave your life you have to go on with your life feeling alone with out them it feels like some one turned the lights off you feel lost in a fog but once your ears are open to hear the voice of wisdom your eyes will lighten you will see those you held dear still with you on the journey you will understand that you wouldn't have gotten this far in life without them |
The Beautiful Point (07212025)mental invisible growling thunder powerful verbs and adjectives paved pathways rainstorm sparks brainstorm excitement in poetic form raindrops transform into teardrops leaping fearlessly into futuristic imagery transcend beyond the range past the limit recitals of written truths swirled spiral sundials define golden coils and traces of silver laces collaboration of love and passion shifting creative process edits the feeling go beyond mere joy immortalizes experience |
Zip Out (07212025)I see too much I see more than I want to see don't want to be blind but don't want to see the things and the pain it makes my eyes bleed I'm not crying I'm leaking like the crack across the ceiling that hung over me like a dark cloud first time I discovered it rains inside thought it was a dream I was having upon awakening in a puddle of reality couldn't see it mentally once had the mentality of ignoring the problem I'm having there's no reasoning with gravity |