minayaJ
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CATEGORY
life
I stay awake
Legs dont stop the shake
Heartaches Venting like earth quakes
The heart feels the stake
I stay awake and try to fake
Waiting for day to break
Slamming on my worn out brakes
Learning from all my mistakes
Instead of wisecracks, giving wise takes
Taking the time, for our hearts to heal & wake
Life's a gamble, its all a risk, yet we dare tempt fate
Life's never ending path, travels better with a life mate
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COMMENTS
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The Immortal Wize says: Though my life mate is no longer living I do agree, the path can be lonely no matter who's with me. |
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mrmelody7 says: Nicely done like the structure and rhyme scheme very meaning ful and usage of words keep at it |
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2b2b2 says: Excellent Work....well crafted and truthful sentiment....can be truly a treasure to ride out together is so blessed....ONE |
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