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Tangled thoughts

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To fight to race to beat your mind and it's wild thoughts

Is like feeling like your mind has been double crossed

With events that appear out of nowhere without any caution signs

You feel like your life is nearing it last line

But when something isn't enough as the sound of windchimes

Noises in your mind that sound like crystalized enzymes

When you want the world to stop for a quick briefing

While you try to gather life an its entirity while your weeping

Your mind is at a pace that sleep has become displeasing

The eyes you used to close to rest are now weeping

 

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Charles2 says:

Good bones this has... easy to elevate to the next level... two to five word phrases...
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mlowe5 says:

Well penned, minayaJ. Indeed...tears of awareness come with the untangling of tangled thoughts. I have found that weeping itself, is often a form of rest. Thanks for sharing this write. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

LP45 says:

Excellent write minayaJ. Loved the imagery and flow in this piece. I can definitely relate to this.Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing!
 

RonnieL says:

Dope! Thought provoking!

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