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Sassy
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Control

CATEGORY

life

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Spinning spiralling thoughts of me left as debris

Seeing you climb that mountain with my child

And my decisevness was not appreciated

So back turned you arrive to the top

Preaching clouds staring out at pulpit

I am down on my knees to the Lord 

You are arriving into being a real man at last

Raising your third child 

Your sentiments are bitter and resentful left at my door

To heal as if a witch, the potion cupboard is not closed

I will disclose his strength 

Allow the almighty into my humble glory

Allow him to write my story

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mlowe5 says:

Deep powerful flow. Control is in the power of who must write their own story; for it is they who live their own life! Just my thoughts. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.

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