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The Immortal Wize

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If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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the first time I done wrong

 it was easy but that kinda easy

was hard on me so hard I
 
immediately stopped what I
 
was doing wrong and looked

for the right way to do it
 
I realized what I was doing
 
wrong was only wrong
 
in the eyes of those who
 
seen me do it I learned that
 
 it wasn't a right or wrong way

to do what I done wrong

 it didn't harm no one

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Makes you wonder, when is right to do something wrong? Interesting write. Peace and Love.
 

Starr says:

Enjoyed this one. Made me think on my own behaviors and how wrong is wrong in the eyes of beholders. But God and I have final say. Nice write.

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