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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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in the mirror seeing double

whose the angel whose the devil

whose the girl whose the boy

whose the clone whose the real

McCoy 24 carat bona fide whose

deceptive whose true to life

unearthly ungodly unrefined

originated artificial intelligence

a striking resemblance

memorable reflection same

complexion realistically clear

life like a graphic chisel of a

craftsman's carbon copy

replica duplicated lookalike

mocking every instinctual

intentional move like a repeating

mocking bird stands on every

word whose the dummy

whose the puppet whose the

whose the jock whose the nerd

a simulation act like me talk

like me parallel universe

Xerox form mole on the

forearm tat on cheek check

the mark it's me not a genetic

copy or forgery ten toes in

sync on my feet no simile

no dead ringer to a stranger

wading in a reflective view

I know you, you know me

we don't touch we often speak

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mlowe5 says:

Profound! " Don't touch...often speak..." Thus is the nature of the broken heart and its unmended pain. To forgive does not mean to forget; rather, it is to remember that such pain should not be caused to be again. Wanting to be touched and reaching out to touch is what mends and heals---vaccinating all! Peace and Love, mlowe5.
 

Breadcrumbs2021 says:

Sometimes a moment of self-reflection is what counts the most in this world of fakes and look-a-likes, it pays to be an original, I enjoyed this poem. thanks

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wordsMAKEus says:

SO MANY QUOTABLE LINES... "word whose the dummy whose the puppet whose the whose the jock whose the nerd"

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