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Silence is so loud

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 SILENCE IS SO LOUD:
Do you hear that? The bugs crawling over? On the leaves on the ground trying to get back to home?
Do you hear the dune bugs?
trying to get back to there dome?
Do you hear the trees? Swaying back and forth, some leaves green, some leaves brown , some leaves may even be orange, seasons are changing.
Nothings around, Silence is so loud.
Look at the flowers… can you see the water drops, dropping down from the top of the trees from the morning dew?
Silence is so loud , I would have never knew.
Sitting in your home? Can you hear that? The creeks and the pops of your old home. Can you hear each drop from the unfixed falsest in the sink of the kitchen? Drop drop drop drop…. Do you notice it so much that it bothers you?
Silence is so loud..
Alone in this mess of silence, shhhh can you hear that?
Just wait and listen….
Can you hear that?
The beat. The beat of your heart? What does it say?
Will you be different from this day?
I’m I on my own? The silence is so loud.
I feel like im lost in this world, what is my destiny?
Can you hear that? The thoughts of your mind getting confused because you don’t know what to do in this world,
Just like playing a card game does if feel like u should fold?
Or is it that I just wish I had someone to hold.

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thebookofspells says:

I feel u, all the anxiety, the hyper-sensitivy...I feel u
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Imagination_733 says:

This is well written. I dig descriptive poetry :)
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tretre says:

Thanks to the both of you. Many more poems to come.
 

DallasCowgirl says:

This was beautifully written! Thanks for sharing

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