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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Passing Through

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Lord, I press upon your nerves
so that you could feel the pain
that only you can heal and if
it bothers you bad enough you
will walk on water to care for
the multitude this might come
across rude to others but you
know how I talk to you I was
not made to pretend to act like
you got me when I know I'm
drowning something not right
something's in the water  and
the air I'm a true believer
I don't play church I watched
people beg and plead for
relief and died hurt that can't
be how It works still worse
comes to worse anything
repeatedly practiced is
rehearse it rhymes with
hearse just in reverse
the words in the word
it's a backward curse 
I'm not gone end this with
"Amen" I'm just gone stop
crying for now until
the next downstream

 

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mlowe5 says:

As a Wize One passing through, continue to jot the seen, heard, felt, smelled, tasted, and healing-loving WORD. Peace and Love.
 

Kilomsundrstd says:

Fire as always and very Well written. Talk to him often and listens always! 👌🏿
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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