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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I was there when you put it all together and figured it out you don't know what you done for me I tried telling you but you didn't want company you thought I wanted something from you when I was trying to say thank you you came across rude when I was trying to show gratitude I was there when you found a way out I followed your lead and it led me to be free of the dis...ease if it wasn't for you I'd probably be decease you have no idea how much your risk you took courage and bravery saved me trapped in a place where no one goes free love supposed to be good but what we loved hurt us sitting in a room knowing deep down we doomed jumping out our skin ever time we hear "boom" it's like you forgot me it's like you forgot we were there going through together you made it easier to bear where I be if you didn't care for me I'd probably be six feet deeper than the hole that swallowed me we had different ways to cope unfortunately you used dope while I wrote "there's hope for us both" you mean more to me than you know that's how come no matter how much you struggle with your issues I refuse to let you go until you know

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mlowe5 says:

Profound! Such is the tribute and reciprocity of true love for one another in the oneness of onement in the lives of one another. Another great one from the Poet Wize.
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mlowe5 says:

ONE. Peace and Love.
 

King Suspire says:

Loyalty is a rare commodity

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