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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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it's easy to see what's in front of you but can you see what's behind what's in front of you its always something behind what you going through and always something in front of you liken to trying to see something but it blocking the view as if you running from something and it keeps you from passing through making it difficult to get away from what's behind you looking back at it do it remind you to follow through regardless of what you see in front of you be relentless regardless when trapped inside ain't nothing left to do sep't breakthrough you got to see you on the other side of the barrier you got the ingredients to mix it and the tools to fix it it's worth the trouble if it's worth the struggle it's worth the hustle bustle and exercise to gain the muscle to beat down your adversary it's easy to see don't make it hard to believe

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, "...nothing left to do sep't breakthrough..." and walk in the front of the behind of you and be ever free. Love the beautiful rhythmic flow of this profound message. Missed you dearly, Immortal Wize. Peace and Love.

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