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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Tony loan Wayne five dollars every time Tony went to Wayne to collect Wayne didn't have it Tony got tired of leaving empty handed this upset Tony he realized Wayne never intended on paying him back and the thought of that enraged him he felt like being nice made him a pushover but Wayne didn't think like that in his mind the loan never happened and if it did he and Tony been friends for umteen years he's not gone do nothing about it besides it's only five dollars if only Wayne had been paying close attention to his close friend Tony he would see that he's been under a lot of pressure lately due to being too nice to people who don't appreciate him Toney obsessed about the five dollar loan but was more preoccupied with the thought of how people he loved and trusted had treated him most of his life he thought about how his wife cheated on him how his best friend betrayed him how no one ever said thank you or show him a ounce of appreciation then good kind giving caring sharing give you the shirt off his back Tony suddenly snapped and went back to Wayne's house and left out with blood on his hands it had nothing to do with the five but had everything to do with the fact that Tony was tired

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