if you are contemplating whether you want to continue this journey called life I can't stop you from doing what you decide but please don't commit suicide I know it seems there's no other way out and it does seem that way at times but if you got someone that someone is going to miss you when you're gone you don't have to listen to me but talk to someone who can speak life into your situation someone who cares I care but I don't know you well enough to do anything about your situation other than be a voice of a negotiator talking you down off the ledge I've been driven to that edge you're not the only one on that bridge you don't want to die you just don't know how to live you have to give yourself a chance you know how it feels to lose someone I know you know that kind of pain
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Breadcrumbs2021 says: Empathy is always welcomed, nice. |
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mlowe5 says: Deep. And a much needed pen. Took me back some 30 years ago when I saw a young man I had promised to become a father to, hanging from his bedroom door. Over these 30 years, I have been able to actually help a couple of youths. Thanks. ONE. Peace and Love.poems by this commentor |
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2b2b2 says: Most relevant PSA (public service announcement)....far and near need to hear, see, feel and most of all re-member! ONE |
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