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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Life Lessons Always Come After A Lifetime Of School

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if I'm told to "take out the trash" and I don't "take out the trash" no matter where I go in life when I return the trash is still there but in a worse condition than before then I hear a voice saying to me didn't I tell you to "take out the trash" but I ignore the command and go on with my life again but when I return the trash is still there but this time something smells bad it's the trash I refuse to take out now I don't want to touch it I don't want to go near it so I go on with my life once again making a full circle I return and the trash is still there this time around its rotten swarming with big horseflies covered in squirming slimy maggots why didn't someone else notice my deliberate defiance and decide to lend a hand in a pile of dung I had to accept the pungent fact that it was my trash to take out not someone else's accumulated problem to solve as disgusting and caggingly repulsive as it was I foundly got the job done went on with my life to absorb the remainder of fun never having to return to do the task I should have done without being told or asked stop what you are doing "take out the trash" so when you go you won't have to come back pick up the bag and TAKE OUT THE TRASH!!!

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mlowe5 says:

PROFOUND! IT'S AMAZING HOW DEEP THAT ALLEGORICAL MESSAGE WAS DELIVERED BACK IN THE DAY. ONE. PEACE AND LOVE.
 

love_supreme says:

Nice!

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