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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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 I visited a church with a friend
The pastor pointed out all of my sins

He knew stuff about me way back when
I thought to myself this must be a true prophet

He went on and wouldn't shut up
so I told him to stop it

Then he said that I had to be delivered
he poured oil in his hands

Then asked for help from others
On my head he placed his greasy hand

I thought my head was going to spin
Someone stood to my left my right
And behind my back

He asked me was I ready
Before I could answer

He hit me in my head so hard he knocked me blind
I thought I was going to spit up green slime

I wanted to cuss and hit him back
Cause I dint feel delivered I felt attacked

My knees buckled
I could hear demon's chuckle

The person behind me caught me and laid me on the floor
I remember whispering please no more

I tried to get up but could not get my grip from slipping
They then started to speak in a language I never heard before

In a loud thunderous roar
I was dazed and my head was sore

No one helped me up off the floor
I tried to crawl to the door

But kept slipping on the oily floor

I prayed real hard for my sight
Just in case I had to fight

I remembered my friend and called for help
She said I'm down too save yourself

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bulldognation44267 says:

I like how you can tell a story while maintaining a rhyme scheme and flow..pure talent Wize.

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