if you fail you failed
because you tried not
to fail not because
you tried to succeed
The Immortal Wize
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Peel Back (05052025)
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love_supreme says: Excellent write. |
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Belindathapoet says: True to the Reality that this is Facts!! Trying hard to not to fail, only to do just that, FAIL!!! but it only means to be persistent, Being Persistent is the key to Suceeding!!! EXCELLENT WORK!!! |
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