last time we spoke on a friendly tip you told me to finish it I did it's done I'm on to the next one my flaw is the need for perfection spend too much time correcting connecting to creativity plugging into the outlet I'm looping feeling loopy you knew me now you don't know me ignited the spark you left me I just remembered you left me no explanation walked away after leaving instructions
The Immortal Wize
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Addicted To Hope (03042026)
double up the flow never fall off track snap on the snare when I paint these facts 808 pulse make the whole world crack mindset make moves like a chest piece chasing the first thought never second guess me built the sound proof now I manifest peace heartbeat knock on the wall of my chest it talks yeah it speaks it doesn't text every piece hits like a coded message I keep thinking the beat gone change but the thumps stay the same no pressure no stress got a wave to catch quick witted like a standup comedian handle hecklers like opps in the audience only break bread with those at the table passing the potatoes never lend never borrow is my moto collecting bricks like I'm building sh** stacking up virtual accomplishments in no rush to meet the goal watching prophecy unfold |
Between (04042026)The difference between a believer and a believer is a believer believes. |
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All The Cruel Deeds (03032026)all the ramifications are extremely severe harsh cruel and difficult to bear hard to watch can't help but stare at the unforgiving far reaching effect the immense pain suffering and hardship dealt out ruthless punishment relieving deep anger and desire for retribution the answered call to the passionate effort to get even prayers didn't fall on deaf ears "God still hear God still here" inflicting similar harm to what was received the defender of the people is still and is still in control (iykyk) |
Quote MeIt's gonna be one of those days standing in the way blocking the view won't let me through what would you do if you were me stop in your tracks or precede I could tell you a truth you would not believe open scene in the park talking to trees trying to catch blowing leaves could be doing other things like things you would not believe |
Something To Saysilence is a place to keep secrets safe left more words behind then words could say if the window was open wide enough I'd see more space winds invisible but trees still sway |
F**k YouF**k You is not just two words F**k You is a sentence that should end with a period F**k You is a matter of fact F**k You is absolute when I'm asked "how come I have to cuss"? the truth is I don't have to cuss sometimes I need to cuss besides I'm old enough to express true feelings I can say F**k You if I need to demand attention and convey a deeper meaning requiring intense focus to ensure every word earns its place in the heart and mind of the one on the receiving end I don't say it a lot but when I do I wholeheartedly mean it |