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WarriorCarryingWater
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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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Help the unenlightened become wise

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My first book failed

To capture enough hearts and minds

So what can I do different next time?

What do I say, how should I write?

Should it be fiction or something specific from my life?

Why should I bother, I might not even do it right

I’m not afraid to fail again, or spend time and money

Writing, editing, publishing, and promoting like a dummy

I’m far from famous or rich

So when I apply for book awards, nobody cares to hear my pitch

Too old to be 'cool', and too young to be wise

American media demands confusion, illusions, and lies!

Instead of truth and history lessons

Entertainment over facts

Citizens once had open ears, now they’re plugged with wax!

Streaming endless content from drama, crime, and sports

Most can’t distinguish entertainment from current news reports

When fiction and reality have no boarders history alters course

When the few control the many with distractions and lies

Writers must write stories to help the unenlightened become wise!

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
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Charles2 says:

i hear you brotherman. just like going fishing, going to war, not just wishing. trying to use the right bait, damn the nibblers, till you start getting good bites. Them snatch them in, get’em hooked. Practicing till you get your timing just right. Ride that wave with all your might Do mind melding to capture emotions in ways that make whoever reads it feel so good inside they'll run back for more, just for the pure joy... to bring back memories and good feelings or ideas to calm their minds or even redirect their anger so as not to hold bad inside that will hurt them. And call an inner strength within they might not even know they had. so that the bad folk can no longer cheat them. How to get that magic mind storm on stories which are worth reading. like a jazz beat you can't help but carry inside. something any somebody wouldn't mind chipping in their hard earned dollars to buy. Just don’t stop trying your best, till the day you die.

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Warriorcarryingwater says:

Thanks love_supreme

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Warriorcarryingwater says:

@Charles - I appreciate the advice and encouragement! Happy New Year (2026) to you and yours!

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