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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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The Situation

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It's out for delivery you can't track

it nothing to indicate how many stops away

you have stuff to do but you have to stay

no matter how long it takes

you have to wait it's nearing the end of the day

you get a email it's been delayed

not sure if it'll be today but it's still on the way

you spent the whole day expecting it to arrive

suddenly you're in a mood and no one knows why

anger doesn't come with a disclaimer

 it arrives without warning

escalation of unexpressed emotions

 in other words an explosion

like playing with a gun with the safety off

but really it's no one's fault

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Bragee says:

Frustration at its finest
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Charles2 says:

Loaded!

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