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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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If I lose one more thing in my life
Be betrayed pull out the knife
How much suffering does it take?
How long do I have to feel this way?
When all I do is pray and pray
I’m trying hard not to lose my faith
The truth is sometimes I’m ready to stray
Moon walk down the isle
Backslide and throw in the towel
I wish I could slap somebody
With no law standing in the way
I would slap somebody everyday
To me somebody's got to pay
I let too many people get away
Don’t need jail to be where I stay
But still somebody got to pay
I seek revenge when I pray
Because I need somebody to pay
Before I set it off one day
Put someone in their place
Slap somebody in the face
Hit the gas high speed chase
Bitter like toxic waste
Need sugar to chase the taste
Gangster like De Niro
Hard hearted like pharaoh
Tolerance sum zero

Somebodies got to pay
All I’m trying to say
It better be today

 

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love_supreme says:

I have been here.

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2b2b2 says:

Superb Flow and Reflection.....Payday hunh....Tight!! I so can relate.....ONE
 

tiny says:

i've been here too many times to count. thank you for expressing something that i couldnt put my mind to...
 

ferdinandmagellan says:

Man!! Slap somebody in the face! That's real!

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bulldognation44267 says:

Love it Wize, Gangster like De Niro, Hard Hearted like a Pharaoh. Tolerance sum zero. Rolls of the tongue like a cloud.
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The Immortal Wize says:

Thanks Comrades

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gmcgee325 says:

My sentiments exactly... Sometimes it's really hard to be saved ❤️

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Belindathapoet says:

Yes Sir, Yes sir that just Snapped!!!

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