mrmelody7 | Poetry Vibe
mrmelody7

PRO MEMBER

This poet practices good karma and posts comments 241100
contest winner
I Feel So Real and I owe it all to you-Tribute song for my very favorite Singer and Special friend Natalie Cole-still connected-Feel so real Steve Arrington

Site Rank

RUBY

  double ruby
Total poems   626
Lifetime Views   227647
Total poems - 7 days   2
Total poems - 30 days   6
Total poems - 90 days   16
Total poems - 365 days   58
you need to login or register to leave a comment

When The Sky Was Blue

CATEGORY

life

Views: 594

When the sky was blue I was but a tot

          playing in the parking lot

all 4 seasons came at its given time

 stealing a candy bar was a major crime

            fun was the order of the day

             25 cents went a long way

just watching the airplanes take off into the sky

me wondering whats above those clouds so high

             when the sky was blue the air was fresh

                 knew nothing of the meshing of flesh

                         I never knew of an ozone

                                        and

                          my castle was our home

                           going to school was cool

                 now killing fellow students is the rule

somewhere along the way I was off to war

half way around the world very far

to kill a man I never knew

  when the sky was blue everything was okay

somewhere in between the sky turned dark and grey

               let us pray it does not stay that way

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                          

You must be registered to leave a comment. Registration is FREE.

Register

COMMENTS

 

mirage says:

I really do wish I could go back to the times before the world clouds are judgment smh great read my friend 13
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Sir, your writing is very distinctive

poems by this commentor


 

LP45 says:

Very nice write mrmelody7, you definitely brought back a lot of memories with this one. Love the flow. Thank you for sharing this.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you those were the days the sky was just deep blue and seemed so low I would throw rocks up at the sky expecting the rock to be wet bout 8 yrs old at the time what a dumb kid

login below

Forgot your username?