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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I'll blame this trauma on my mama

why I live in all this drama

going around in circles

seeing the exit but can't get off

so they tried to hook me on Zoloft

it didn't work so I threw it out

I couldn't eat it gave me cotton mouth

all my suffering prepares me for what you read

my scribe is how I bleed

I would die if I couldn't read

I'm in love with Greek philosophy

diagnosed with MDD

that's a lie nothings wrong with me

though I have a dysfunctional family

who can't relate to what I create

trying to hold me down like a paper weight

I'll just  keep coming up till I   have

nothing left to say write or pray

 

 

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Contest Winner  

tretre says:

I like this poem. " I have a dysfunctional family who can't relate to what i create" Same here. I really enjoy reading your poetry. Keep that pen movin!
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2b2b2 says:

Clever Flip.....ONE
 

lloydboy35 says:

YES!!!! I REALLY ENJOYED THIS ONE!!! MY WIFE HAS A DYSFUNCTIONAL FAMILY ON TOP OF HER MOTHER DYING A COUPLE OF YEARS AGO, I STAND BY HER SIDE EVERYDAY!!! A LOT OF MENTAL PAIN!! I UNDERSTAND WIZE DOM!!! KEEP YA HEAD UP BROTHER!!!
 

NternallyMe says:

Wonderfully written, brilliant references and just an overall gem :)

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