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cliffonedge
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 I couldnt resist... I am hurting because of it. My knees are shot my back aches my mind is going crazy I feel alone and it's hazy. Distorted visions leading me to my kness but feeling defeat I am reeling for a hoping of a healing. I couldnt resist... and now I am here spilling my load off to you eliminating my fears venting to the extension called a listening ear. Fears I have none in your realm I am found. I am proud and I stand in my cloud not named yet because it comes and goes but I am glad that you stayed for some of my show. I couldnt resist I had to tell you how I felt. Being the mold so when I melt it's into what I was meant to be thankyou for needing me because I needed you.

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2b2b2 says:

Excellent Write...like where you went in this piece....ONE...thanks for sharing!
 

mrmelody7 says:

Very stylish, lots of rhythm

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