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lightness in the dark
As a phoenix rises.

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Things that happen at night

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Hiding from the walls...?

Or...the kid who never speaks at all.

Concealing yourself from the outside..of the structure you call your home.

Knowing the kid sleep on his own..thus nobody knows what he does when he's alone.

The four walls witnessing his transformation...from..a..lil innocent kid to a man with a telescope.

Looking for shooting stars is what we perceive and hope.

But it gets broken...like a fathers wishes of marrige for his daughter and...she suddenly chooses to elope.

So the parents have lost hope.

Tried changing the kid but it was pushing a mercedes benz up a steep slope.

So they gave up hope.

But it entirely his fault.

I mean the girl is in her two piece pretending to walts.

And that kid with the telescope who I thought was nasty is just and admirer of dance.

Who was...looking at the moon and by chance caught a glance.

Entrapped in the motion of her body he just kept looking.

Knowing she was looking back.

Dancing on the balcony..swaying side to side...she, looking at his eyes, made a mistake and tripped over the rail...heading to the opposite of the sky.

As a lil kid he didn't know why...she wouldn't appear at quarter to 9...every night.

Now it was always dark with no light.

And from that night...he be...staring even at 28...

Street...he be...staring into apartment 45.

Hoping to see her eyes.

But he met others.

An under-age provocative 16 with hopes of being a stripper.

No gimmicks or irony.

Of fear from any.

Spotted his eyes while trippin on the balcony..

The rest is history

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2b2b2 says:

Brilliant....Flavorful twisting....Bravo!
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Number3 says:

thank you comrade. Word up

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I enjoyed the ride here.

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