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lightness in the dark
"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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Just Once

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 Just once, let your heart be ever so gently, and peacefully touched by the beauty of mine, Cover your inward self with the finely threaded lace  of my love, as it grows more precious with time.   Just once, listen to the vibrations of my heart, pulsing out the breath of life, with strong vigor, Sound out the syllables rhythmically; they are transmitting a message, with such humming fervor.   Just once, feel the closeness that surrounds, even in Friendship, our two beings, Don't block out my spiritual feelings so rare; touch, experience and feel great things.   Just once, select from my menu, and taste the delicate, tender feelings I have for you prepared, They were destined to be slowly savored, while nurturing the soul, and with you, unselfishly shared.   Just once, can't you for a change bend your rules, and be lead down the path of your heart's instincts, Allowing  yourself to admit, to what your own heart and  mind oftend secretly dream and think.   Just once, recognize, verify and realize my feelings, as  they speak freely of their own volition, They are surrendered, unrestricted, unchained; I have placed no limit, not even a condition.                                                        

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The Immortal Wize says:

Deeply felt!
 

DreamPoet says:

This is deep, Very deep. Write more like this one please?

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tretre says:

Thank you Wize Dom....Thanks for showin love. Keep that pen movin!
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tretre says:

Thank you DreamPoet! I will try to write more like this one. Keep that pen movin!
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2b2b2 says:

Beautiful Share...thank you

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