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Wrong Side of a Love Song

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first love

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 I fell in love when I was young.

It was a beautiful thing.

The highs and lows.

Emotionally satisfying.

My first love was my passion for music...

Then I met you.

A journey to the top of the world...

And back.

Nothing lasts forever.

I ruined you,

you ruined me.

Now every melody reminds me of you.

I used to love the songs where you could FEEL the hurt,

those songs moved me.

Now I just hear the hurt.

I hear your complaints in every lyric.

Every line is soaked in your tears.

Every argument we ever had plays out in chord...after chord.

I used to love music.

Now I find myself hiding from the symphony.

I can't get no...satisfaction.

I ruined you,

you ruined the music in me.

 

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

Really nice, I like how it flows.

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bekz580 says:

Thank you
 

<3 says:

Your writing reminds me of another great poet I once knew, great work I love reading them all.

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