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Swirls of Emptiness

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 Gathered inside my hand, siver studs and golden stars

glisten from the oils within my bath.

As I watch the glitter intwine inside the swirls of the drain,

had I washed away more than just  the soils of the day ?

 Was my pride inside those swirls, my dignity, my soul !

There's a loss, an emptiness, shame,

And nothing can wash away that which I've...

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PhranklynKhian says:

Leaves you wanting more

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royale Jones says:

How you something so simple so deep! Damn! Great piece.
 

Wordman21 says:

Thank you so much
 

darylg44 says:

Love this! great write

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LP45 says:

Like the song says: "Things that make you go hmmm". Very nice Wordman. Word.

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