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lightness in the dark
As a phoenix rises.

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Disillusionments confusion : Her story

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first love

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The water broke and there she was.

An entity with a mindset worthy of reaching the stars.

Fancy cars and clothes, the lifestyle bestowed.

She is a being.

Without a feeling.

She's numb to the pain.

Immune to gain the pleasures on the greener side of the fence.

Hence there's a limit to her happiness.

A highway obstacle to her pinnacle everything's limit.

On a night out, going around losing ground.

Losing her way, being wrenched slowly.

The pain of a blunt knife is like losing your first love on the first night making love.

Or was it love.

The consequences above are detailing the reason she left school..not being illusioned that that's cool. But.

The being trapped in the mud, a unexpected planned flood..of tears and not those of joy.

Like a toy she was played to believe that she was worth it.

Breaking it.

Showing no poker face of the pain acquired with it...

Showing no bank statements of the funds to help her young.

Now there's two and the story continues..

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2b2b2 says:

Wow....Fantastic Work....Quite Brilliant...thanks for sharing...ONE

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mrmelody7 says:

In the groove with this

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royale jones says:

Damn! Deep deep deep! You are a poetic assassin! Sir.

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HatemShakur says:

worth a read, nicely written

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Number3 says:

Thank you for the feedback fellow poets. Word Up!

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