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CocoAbeni
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Revolution

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Revolution!

No, enough fighting

Enough fighting for a system we were never designed for

A lock & a key...it was fitting to well

Now the only key a black male can access is the key to his cell.

Mentally, Physically we are locked up from trying to rebel.

Lets understand that the understanding will never be understood.

It doesn't mean that we are not worthy..they just like us better when we chillin' in the hood & destroying our own neighborhoods!

Rebellious so they can accept us..acceptance from a system that constantly fails us.

It seems so ironic..like "So the last will be first, and first will be last"

In God's will we will keep lasting...

Oppression- oppressed

Repression- repressed

Our mental state has been altered so much that we hate our own selves, oppressed to the unrecognizable.

We should really reconsider this revolt to fit into this system..

No revolution equals equality to our physical, mental, & spiritual freedom. Why fight for a system that wasn't designed for us to begin with?

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The Immortal Wize says:

This is my kind of spken word, well written thanks for sharing.

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CocoAbeni says:

Thanks! it means a lot coming from someone of your caliber

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