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She see (Ode to Me)

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I see eyes full of life and a heart filled with sorrow. I see someone who's fight is to have hope for tomorrow. I see your circumstances and i know you didnt have many options to choose from, but i watch you stand strong everyday even though you are hurting. Its, 85 degrees outside, flowers bloomed and sturdy winds brushing past the face damp with tears and you think no one hears. You have to keep your head up, you can't give up cause if you don't fight for you how you will you move up in the world. i see the way you wake up and prepare for the day and i heard the questions you ask in your mind, its time for a change. change in perception, change in circumstance not the ones you cant change but the choices you make that werent thought through all the way. this is my ode to you strong, and loving, intelligent, sophisticated, underestimated, unappreciated woman, i hear you and i am you. i want you to inhale...........exhale, shed a tear or cry if you need to and know that no one can judge you and i will always be there to see you through cause i havent and i wont give up on you. i see you and i love you too. i know how much family means to you and it breaks your heart to not be able to participate in family reunions, take road trips to see your grandmother who raised you and is now constantly sick. i feel the emptiness inside and the loneliness you try to hide. Its hard to convence yourself when everything seems against you and i know you have faith even though you feel its constantly being tested and you have no control over it. Yet know that i am here, i will wipe every tear, i will listen to every word and i will fight your fears. know that i love you and I'm hear for you and never forget when no one else but God your children, family and  i myself care, that i see you...

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The Immortal Wize says:

WOW! beautiful and touching words.

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scash102 says:

Thank you much for reading and feed back.
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2b2b2 says:

Uplifting Share....Write On.....ONE
 

scash102 says:

Thank you 2b2b2
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Corey says:

I could truly relate to your piece...sometimes it takes a self pep talk to push us through our storms. Thanks very much for sharing!

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