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A matter of time

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         From my jitter bug days until now,  you was my king and I loved you with no doubt   But indeed everything is different from here on and out . Long ago I didn't see wrong within you . hell you was my father everything was right if it concerned you i mean your mouth never lied and your eyes never sided, but your actions showed everything you couldn't really hide it . Then I realized it . Instead of being my loving father you was only timing it . 18 is your lucky number, -that's not really surprising - during the time you was missing I was steady rising . Persistence made me strong in my struggles , I survived it . I'm your blood and we are each other's twin . Who would have ever thought that we would come to an end . I love you dearly ,but my stubbornness won't let you in . Let's have a family reunion and we can start over again .                                                                                                           -Hudson, Quanna  

 

 

 

 

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Woven says:

Some words are hard to take back, some actions harder still. But there's nothing like a father daughter relationship, so hopefully it's only a matter of time before it will be mended. Heartfelt write, well expressed.
 

twistedbeauty says:

very beautiful poem
 

AK Rio says:

I feel ya emotion

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