Looking down the barrel of a gun pow!!! There goes reality. life here in jeopardy. screaming at the guy saying please don't take my life away. praying to the lord screaming give me one more!!! life, so i can do it right. i know i make mistakes but i ain't trying to die tonight. my life back at home i gotta son and a wife and a baby on the way another reason here to stay. Suddenly the barrel move away from my face, he must've had a heart, I'm glad he got heart. The power of the lord start as soon you pray. so let him play his part, i let him play his part. Then the man said i could've end your life here today but when it all falls down I'm gonna regret this. And both lives change in a matter of seconds but i don't think neither one of us gone forget this. The power of a prayer can change things in a instant so let us all pray bow your head commitment, Thank you Lord!!
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BITE says: AMEN |
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The Immortal Wize says: Nice! |
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tretre says: Beautiful poem...."The power of the lord starts as soon as you pray" The lord works before you start praying, never forget he knows your thoughts, and your desires. He's working even when you think he's not. Keep that pen movin ChrisJ!!! |
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chrisj21390 says: Thanks you guys, and Thanks tretre I will remember that I will continue to write because that's what I love to do I also write songs as well |
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hymnagen says: This piece really pulled me in. Real visual. Well done; keep making use of the blessing! |
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DallasCowgirl says: Very well played out. Thanks for bringing that imagery to this piece. Keep writing! |
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