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love_supreme
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lightness in the dark
We will make it through this. Believe that.

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Rumble young man rumble

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I saw you today. You let them get all up in your ether. They had you feeling things when you should have been dreaming things. They pushed your peg and you moved and they grooved to that. You did a two-step but it was two steps back. You stumbled with it and broke style and protocol. 

You were supposed to take it while you were asking for it. Push your foot down and floor it, punch a whole in the bottom of that car. Scar them and dose them with nothing but the funk. 

Stank walk all up and down they *ss but do it with class. Smile when you do it and make sure you hum that favorite rap song that had a beat that sounds like guns cocking.

Toss them over the roof and leave them at the dock in cement boots.

And you  my friend just school dem n*ggas

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The Immortal Wize says:

Damn!!! Latin you done set it off up in here.
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hymnagen says:

"Stank walk all up and down they *ss but do it with class."This line reminded me of my Moms (R.I.P.). I'd seen her bring a grown man to tears and never utter a curse word in the process. She was a LADY. Strong write, latin_lover. Peace
 

love_supreme says:

thank you for the comments. I really appreciate it.

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SYQ222 says:

Thats cool

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