My name whistles in the wind
The hot sun rides amid the frigid sky
The light pierce my eyes
Reaching down to the depths of my soul
I blink the sting below
Grateful the world still glows.
Coloured_Asian
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Waking Up
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KingQadarDwon' says: This is very beautiful... Keep penning.... Thanks for sharing.... Write on |
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BoRhyme says: Yes Sir King, I Agree, And Asian, You Always Have Great Visuals!!! |
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HumbleMeeksInFloetry4 says: SIMPLY DEEP AND AW-INSPIRING! BEAUTIFUL! |
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love_supreme says: Loved this one. Excellent write. |
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DallasCowgirl says: Very nice |
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