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Broken

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romance

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The dew clings to grass

Even after the storm has passed

That's how our connection disconnected

Now we're left with the rumble but no thunder

Memories fade in sunset shadows

It whispers through our minds

Abrupt like explosions to supernovas 

I can't help but wonder what we could have been

Those footsteps we took

Now lost in the sand....

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COMMENTS

 

DallasCowgirl says:

Beautiful and sad

 

HumbleMeeksInFloetry4 says:

Wow, Very Deep, Real, and Truth! Excellent write!
 

Jay Beach says:

Dope. I like how every thing kinda had its opposite in the same line or in the next one. Very tight.
 

Coloured_Asian says:

Thank you all for all your feedback it's appreciated

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