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HymnAgen
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lightness in the dark
Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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Sweet Perplexity

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romance

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Have you noticed 
I sometimes lay here 
watching you?
Wondering 
why you’ve stayed here
Questioning 
why you came here 
to begin with
Befuddled 
that I even piqued your interest,
yet thankful 
for things I still do not understand 
Like: 
What about me 
made you want me for your man?
Like: 
What could you have seen in me 
that I missed
long before you sipped 
the savory mocha flavor of my kiss? 
Through all of this 
I recognize that love is blind
I’ve never heard the words, 
“Ooooh, that brotha’s fine!”
directed toward me 
still you reward me 
with your time,
your playful touch, 
and smile that shines
with starlight brilliance 
as easily today as when fate 
first led us to find 
one another
Though broken in 
like well worn jeans 
our frayed hems and unraveled seams 
still feel fresh to me
D@mn, you even drove 
through the snow to me
Braved rains 
high speed wipers 
could not clear the pane to see
the lane to be with me 
for just a few moments
For fear karma won’t condone it 
I’ve never dared to ask you
“Why?” 
I just accept 
being “that guy” 
Though mystified, 
some mysteries should just remain so...

- HymnAgen

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The Immortal Wize says:

I could feel every bit of this, if only I could put it all together, like this. I'd have it together...nameen?

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prettygirl23 says:

You truly have an amazing gift. Keep writing!

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ElroyKen says:

Tight write

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hymnagen says:

Wize, you already got it on point, but I feel you tho...#MuchRespect
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hymnagen says:

prettygirl23, Thanks for reading and commenting. I do appreciate it :o)

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hymnagen says:

ElroyKen, I see you, bruh #Salute!

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Corey says:

This was like having a front row seat to witness a man's expression of experiencing authentic love. An absolutely beautiful write, loved it!
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hymnagen says:

I really appreciate that Corey. Thank you!

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